How to Write a Press Release, Brian Cook
Some notes from How to Write a Press Release, Second Edition, by Brian Cook
Right story in the right place at the right time
PR should be: relevant, focused, timely, readable, presentable and newsworthy
Include one of the themes: controversy, conflict, novelty or empathy
The Four Ps: People, Product, Places, Profits
When launching a new product: name of product, when it launched, what it does, how it is positioned in the market, who is the main user, how large is the market, what are the distribution channels, who headed development?
When announcing a contract: Headline, intro sentence on deal, more about deal, more about companies
Tests: So-what, simple story, complete and in context
First sentence: Must always tell the story - what, who, where, when, why
Headline: 10 words max, add a verb, not funny or clever
Avoid: puffery, self-praise and exaggeration
Pegs: timing, event, issue, conflict
Words to avoid: unique, leading, fastest, flexible, easy-to-use, popular, world-class, successful, breakthrough, major, versatile, key
Quotes: valuable, keep it human, avoid self-praise